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Please,please,please comment good or bad I don't care.
The Lonely Life
The lonely life
My life for real
The lonely life
There's no way to heal
The lonely life
How sad it can be
The lonely life
Is the only life for me
The lonely life
Makes it hard to believe
The lonely life
Is difficult to leave
The lonely life
My life to survive
The lonely life
Where only I can thrive
The lonely life
You can try hard
The lonely life
You will discard
The lonely life
You can't make it work
The lonely life
You can't just lurk
The lonely life
Is only for I
The lonely life
Don't even try
- by The Real Goth Vampire |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/20/2009 |
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- Title: The Lonly Life
- Artist: The Real Goth Vampire
- Description: I hope you like this. Please, Please, Please coment good or bad. I NEED feedback. So I can try to improve.
- Date: 01/20/2009
- Tags: lonly life
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Comments (5 Comments)
- icebox123456789 - 01/22/2009
- nice, you put a lot of emotion into a short poem. dont let people tell you that it is not good because it is and you should keep writing.
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- moria_mod2009 - 01/22/2009
- thats how i feel....love it
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- Jestyfer - 01/22/2009
- I like it its good
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- Mercy Tompson - 01/21/2009
- i love it
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- pandabears9 - 01/20/2009
- thats a great poem =D
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