My Wonderland

• Artist: ---xMiss_Amaya
• Description: I wrote this a while ago, inspired by not only Disney (and Bri-chan from When Curiosity Met Insanity) I was inspired by how some people wish to have their childhood fantasies sweep them away from the reality that we face today.
  I am proud of this poem, but wouldnt mind hearing critisism on what to change / what is(or was) wrong with it.
  please rate and let me know what you think. thanks!
• Date: 01/22/2009
• Tags: wonderland

My Wonderland, My Wonderland,
Oh how I wish I could fly into your arms,
And you can catch me
And use your magical Charms
To take me away from this Reality
Some call Home.
But not for me.
My home is where my heart lies
And in your world
Thats is where it flys
For joy
Comfort,
And love.
Oh, My Wonderland...
My Wonderland...
When will I see you again?

Comments

[iSandii-chan]

That's really pretty ^^
I guess we all wish that we can escape the reality that is our society. Great Job! *two thumbs up*