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Noone can heal my broken heart
All my dreams have fallen apart
Living life through broken tears
Not afraid of all those Fears
Hurt is ripping through
Think I feel some sorrow too
I can pray for all my sins
But he'll never let me win
Never trully thought of the end
My built-in trust will never mend
Tears falling to the ground
Can't wait 'till the next round
Nothings really as it seems
Broken Tears for fallen dreams
- by Unfound Dreams |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/24/2009 |
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- Title: TWISTED:Broken Tears
- Artist: Unfound Dreams
- Description: Remixed version of Broken Tears
- Date: 01/24/2009
- Tags: twistedbroken tears
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Comments (7 Comments)
- atsyrk - 02/07/2009
- Hannibal shouldnt have been so mean. I mean yeah, you could improve a little but the essence of it is amazing!! Comment on mine?
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- HannibaLecter - 01/24/2009
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Its truly shocking that that compilation of...I'll call it adolescent woe, moved people. It seems as though all it requires to be an accomplished poet is to use bitter resentment, teenage-woe and self-important misery, throw it into a poorly written cluster of generally vague words, literally, filled to the brim with malcontent.
Maybe you should try to rewrite it, using actual grammar and perhaps using something formally known as Sentence-flow. It might improve whatever that was supposed to be - Report As Spam
- the black death named Ra - 01/24/2009
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its realy moveing and deep 5/5
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- music_luver95 - 01/24/2009
- Youre really good you know!?
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- Talaren Ko - 01/24/2009
- awesome!
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- Romantic Massacre - 01/24/2009
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aw, I really like it!
5/5 - Report As Spam
- lillen300 - 01/24/2009
- well you are a way better writer than me hehe
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