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it feels like some one
just captured my heart
but the feeling isnt right
it isnt you, the one i know
the one who i seemed to fall for
as hard as the pavement
under neath our feet
when im with him
its different
then when im with you
the feeling isnt right
its out of sight
when i hold his hand
i feel your touch
when he holds me tight
i dont feel safe
i feel like some one has kidnapped me
in there own vision of love
the feeling isnt right
because some how i wont let go
of the fact
that i love you
- by realitychic55 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/25/2009 |
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- Title: the feeling isnt right
- Artist: realitychic55
- Description: no comment, it explains
- Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: love notthesame
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- Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights - 01/27/2009
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The ending doesn't work with the rest of the poem. The message works, it just doesn't sound right.
Also underneath is one word and it would be "in their own vision of love"
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