these thoughts

• Artist: ill be ur sun
• Description: a poem about a suicidal heroin addict
• Date: 01/26/2009
• Tags: these thoughts

my rage builds within
it craves every sin
thoughts of pain grow harder
with those thoughts comes horror
sight of knifes ready to hunger
a few stabs will make me stronger
selfish deed i wonder
will people care i ponder
i wanna see if hell is real
but if i see my soul he'll steal
with this needle i will heal
this is the way i always feel

Comments

[edwardR97]

i feel like that too man this poem is deep and great keep writing stuff like this

[edwardR97]

i feel like that too man this poem is deep and great keep writing stuff like this

[ill be ur sun]

ty

[Toxic_Pinup_]

thats very deep and sorrowful, i love it, 5/5 and added to my favs

[ill be ur sun]

thanks

[Kanon is Love]

you misspelled ponder...
just saying^^
it's really good...

[MrFreshboyz1]

your words show anger from inside the thoughts are like the drugs to a disease that's feel with the afterlife. it feels the time has frozen only for you and you alone because you feel too self conscious too realized the things you left for no damn reason... i feel this way too but but its worth the time because i have nothing left...