words can kill

• Artist: Tainted_ Halo_of_ Misery
• Description: i wrote this because the boy reminds me of me sometimes
• Date: 01/31/2009
• Tags: words kill

There once was a boy.
Who's feelings were deprived.
Not allowed to express.
How he felt on the inside.

Forced to hide his emotions.
Never to shed a tear.
Because of what they might do to him.
Made him shutter in fear.

They called him an abomination.
A disgrace to mankind.
All because he was different.
In most of their minds.

Their words of pure hatred.
Dug wholes in his heart.
Their words so wicked.
They tore him apart.

&& the day the boy died.
Brought chaos and shock.
He was young and never ill.
&& now they know that their words can kill.

Comments

[Reo Ann 567]

its good, very telling

[Iamthedarksideofthemoon]

It reminds me of me ocassionally too...And some of the things i write are pretty good, but nothing like this!

[Gymnast Castor]

Most the times when a song or poem rythms it isn't that good, but yours is good and it rythms.

[Iamthedarksideofthemoon]

.....amazing.....utterly...amazing.

[Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX]

ur poem is so true and it reminds me of some poems i have wrote before and ty for ur comment 5/5

[xXRIKUXxLaCeY]

that was....pretty kewl-kewl!!!