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It's been a while since I wrote something like this
maybe it was when I had my first kiss
or when we first held hands
at a time when I wasn't sad or mad
but glad to be alive
just happy all the time
But of course life has its nasty surprises
something unexpected over ther horizon
and I wanted to slow down...
hide away forever with a eternal frown
but then I met you with a open hand
will to take me all over the lands...
So girl, what do you want?
I'll make breakfast for you
and call you beautiful with your messed up hair
and mean it too
So girl, what do you need?
My body and soul is the best security
and available for all eternity
I won't take anything for granted between us
I'll cherish every second we're together cuz
I'll regret the seconds when we aren't
we'll go to the park and relax
I won't bring up nothing from the nasty past
and forgive any mistake that happens
and I'll try not to cause them too
but hey, I'm a guy
(I mean I'm not perfect, but I know I won't hurt you...)
I'll be by your side everyday
and at night, when in bed we lay
I'll hold on to you gently
letting you know, I'm here
and won't leave you ever
never ever
a relationship is too light of a word
and our melody matches the serenity of the birds
that fly together towards the sun
and like a loverbird, if you go away
I'll wither away each day
till I can be with you again up above
cuz no distance can ever challenge our love
and everyday we'll argue
about who loves who
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- Title: craptacular love poem
- Artist: ABluejay
- Description: Well this was a poem that I plan on editing and present to my gf (who is now my EX) when I thought it was perfect, but now... you know. You guys can steal it and edit it on youw own, I really don't care
- Date: 02/04/2009
- Tags: craptacular love poem
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Girouette - 03/11/2009
- CHessy, yet will melt the heart, lol
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- 290DarkStars - 02/09/2009
- DUDE YOUR A REAL POET! I havnt seen the best poem on Gaia untill I saw This! and thank you for generously allowing us to copy you (though im not one to take credit for someone elses masterpiece) mrgreen please comment on my stuff! Im your newest fan and... well... I LOVE your poem... Its perfect to the last bit.
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