Foresight the Future

• Artist: Tetsumi Shirogame
• Description: I made this poem a while ago. Hope you ppls like it! Plz comment! ^_^
  
  (Note: I didn't want to change my original title but I wanted to. Oh well!)
• Date: 02/06/2009
• Tags: foresight future

A glistening moon,

On a cool night,

Tells me that soon,

The future will be bright.

My dreams could come true,

And adventures will follow,

Unexpected things out of the blue,

Not much crying or sorrow.

Stay strong in the fight,

For your own will to be,

Don't let others blind your sight,

Of who you're meant to be.

Comments

[Tetsumi Shirogame]

thts true thanx 4 tellin me! it was an old poem and i didn't change it at all. i think i made it when i was 11 lol

[Bridget Paloumar]

Not too bad, but could be better if you got some real emotional pull into it.

[xXHARMONIC blADE Xx]

nice