read this please

• Artist: MeSupPerson321
• Description: about kids
• Date: 02/09/2009
• Tags: read please

roses are red violets are blue daddy we love you and we miss u to

Comments

[iGarth]

Not very original. You just used the 'roses are red, violets are blue' starting line. You should try and write something from scratch, making up the words completely independently. Also, use some proper punctuation and spelling - 'you' is only two letters longer than 'u', so there is no harm in using it.