My Broken Heart

• Artist: Night Angelic
• Description: There was this girl in my school I liked and I was going to ask her out this one day. Then right before I was about to ask her she said her boyfreind had sent her tickets to some concert. I got really upset and wrote this. I hope u like it.
  
  Also the pic says *can a broken heart really mend?*
• Date: 02/13/2009
• Tags: broken heart

She ripped my heart out
She broke it in two
She rip it to pieces
Now i miss you

I wish I knew
That you were taken
Beacause all that stuff
That I had did
I did it beacuase I liked you

The way your coal eyes glistened
I should have realized
That you had liked a different guy

What a fool I was
That I was that I could have been better then him
I wish there was a way
I wish we could have been

Her black swaying in the wind
Like a silky smooth black satin curtains
Her picth black eyes are like coals
Which fuel my passion for you

Your sence of style is chaotic
One day tour gloom and doom
Then the next day your happy and cheery
It keeps me on my toes

We have soe much in common
You don't care I am a little crazy
I don't care what people say about you

Comments

[The Marvelous Joshua]

good job
I liked it =]

[Zero1825]

i love ur poem. this one is really good too! smile

[xXx_xiRAWRcupcakezx_xXx]

i lovezz it. im sorry that happened to u tho, *hugz*

[xXx_darkpleasures_xXx]

aww the description was sad to! *hugs* im sowy alex

[xXx_darkpleasures_xXx]

wow O_O amazing! and yay first comment again!!! i loved it