An Angel's Tear

• Artist: Common Reactor
• Description: I wrote this for my english class, and I just want to know what people think.
  Be honest. I don't mind brutality.
• Date: 02/21/2009
• Tags: angels tear

Call it Love,
Call it Fear;
Overall, an Angel's tear.

Relieving the stress,
lifting the hex;
Overall, the Angels bless.

Cooling the heat,
Enduring defeat;
Overall, two lost Angels meet.

Once again,
Lift your head,
And embrace...
An Angels Tear.

Comments

[Cupcakes R Us]

very creative. i overall loved it. i am a poet and i think this piece is very good. 5/5

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Ah, angels. This poem is not altogether horrible. I feel it is a bit bland. It is most certainly cliche. "Angel tears"? Get real. That has been used more times than I care to count. It is short, boring, a bit repetitive, and lacks that creative edge that actually makes me want to read it.

[Never The End]

Hmmm.
I actually like it. Better then most people's poems that I have read. Maybe you could add more to it. It was cute. 5/5