Don't You Know how it hurts?

• Artist: xox_Cherry_Babe_xox
• Description: Ummm well i was quite sad at the time so i wrote this.
  I know its not great but umm tell me wat u think anywayz thanx bye.
  xxxx
• Date: 02/23/2009
• Tags: dont know hurts

Can't you see? Don't you care
I want to die?
Don't you listen? Can't you hear
My silent cry?
Won't you turn? Can't you hold
Me to your heart?
Are you afraid of what might follow
Once you start?

Would you rather not believe
I'm in such pain
That all your sense and good advice
Must be in vain?

Would you rather tell yourself
I'll be OK,
And all this adolescent angst
Will go away?

Ah! Would I also swim across
This lake alone!
But if you cannot swim with me,
I know I'll drown.

Comments

[xox_Cherry_Babe_xox]

Nah dw bout it its always gd to get feedback

[Ms Make Me Smile]

i liked it i thought it could be a bit longer but i still loved it also i didnt personally like the last paragraph much reallly. but i still liked it alot 4 out of 5 sorry if i hurt your feeling

[xox_Cherry_Babe_xox]

Ily 2 sweety and it aint that gd it shoiuld be like 1 outta 5.

[ll Tears of Joy ll]

wow
excellent as always babes
ily