BETRAYAL

• Artist: Dark_Aeris-chan
• Description: I wrote this when my best friend really made me upset. I helped her in her relationship with this jerk. he broke a promise to her right infront of me, insulted many things. Plus he made her cry.. Anyways.. I cant find the final draft so im stuck w/ the rough draft (Not so good one)
• Date: 02/25/2009
• Tags: betrayal

When someone you love has been taken
Such as your very best friend
and you feel your heart is breaking
though you both promised you would be there for eachother until the very end

It hurts even worse when the one who stole them did it to get the upper hand
nonetheless someone you absolutely cant stand
was this all part of your plan
or was it simply beacuse you can..

Comments

[Jazzy104_music]

Yeah, u've done better. It kinda didn't flow like a poem should...But i understand that u wanted to pour ur feelings on paper...

[regular jones]

this one is ok. youve done better