look my way

• Artist: regular jones
• Description:
• Date: 03/02/2009
• Tags: look

im right in front of you
just turn your head.
look at me not though me.
i need you to see
how bad i need you.
im more than i look
im more than a friend.
if you can only just see that
this crazy could all end.
i cant wait till the
day you find you love me to.
untill you see that all
we can be is friends.

Comments

[Ravv Hashbrovvn]

fix last two lines.XD

[regular jones]

what its saying is i want you to see i dont want to be just freinds. and in the end its saying that cuz all you see me as is a friend thats all we can be till you see more.

[marunar]

In the seventh line, you're trying to tell whoever this person is that your more than a friend. But, in the last two lines, you're saying that all you two could be is friends. So you might want to fix that.