Love

• Artist: Naruto Freak 77
• Description: this is once again another poem about love, as you can most likely tell by the title. Enjoy!
• Date: 03/05/2009
• Tags: love

You are like are fallen petal from a flower.
Your smile is like the bright full moon.
Your laugh is like the fresh fallen snow.
So gentle and soft.
Everything about you is perfect
In my very eyes, heart, mind, and soul.
This is why I love you.
You are like a star that shines brighter than any diamond.
You are like a bright sun that brings warmth to my heart.
You are like a flower, unique with your own beauty.
You're also like a snowflake, so frail yet so beautiful.
You are kind, loving, and gentle to all.
You have your ups and downs,
As do I.
But no matter what happens in the future,
I will always be by your side.
Through tough times.
Through sad times.
Through all the times that you will go through.
I will be with you.
Now and always.
I love you,
And I always will.

Comments

[MissRein]

Love the imagery. Most poets use commas, rather than periods, to separate lines. Plus, there's no stanza pattern (ABCB, you know?). Anyone can write free verse. It takes more talent to write with a pattern and make it work. smile
That's my thought. I'll give you a 5 though. I do like this. :3

[Reprogrammed]

I love all the figurative language you used in here. It paints a picture in my head. All the similes you used... this is good writing.

[missmemister]

this is definitely written about someone, i can feel it! its an adorable poem dear smile

[faking orgasms - - x]

The thing I love bout your poems is the imagery you give. It is as if I can see your lover by the way you describe him. Excellent