Reality Game

• Artist: xxWillie16xx
• Description: Have u ever knew someone who thinks they're better than u and makes u feel ashamed...Maybe thatz wat they think....I know of someone.....This is for him
• Date: 03/13/2009
• Tags: anger

As he walks down the hall
with his evil little stare,
thinking he owns everyone else
just because his life's a despair.

Making others cry...Making people die
Is this what u dream.
I can see right through you
I'm the one who makes you scream.

If you wanna be known as someone
why make yourself suffer
in a bottomless pit of pain....
Now that I wonder...

You're a nobody for your actions
a nobody I say...
So have fun messing up your life
in your reality game......

Comments

[Animals grl]

I loves it! ^^
how ever- u get 4/5
sorryz

[RisexWithxthexDead]

I thought it as very interesting. My only problem is that you should've edited your grammar being this arena is for writing. Also, poetry doesn't require punctuation unless it is a question mark. Still good job.