happy

• Artist: [-trekkie-]
• Description: its true i realy feel this way sometimes cause my bf broke up with me.
  sometimes i feel so nothing its like all i can do is kill myself to escape from it.
• Date: 03/15/2009
• Tags: happy

once,
i was happy
in your arms

once ,
i was happy.

once,
i was sad
away from you

once,
i was sad.

now
i feel nothing
why have you done this to me?
why have you meade me feel this way?
i wish i were dead
i wish
i
could
feel.

Comments

[missmapleleaf]

I feel like the poem might be better without the second and fourth stanza. 3/5

[Faded Dreams5]

I totally know the feeling! that cold numbness that you can't get rid of.
Good poem. Liked the simplicity of it--it really described the feeling without saying much.