This is My Reality

• Artist: faux_fur_rabbit
• Description: A younger friend of mine, who's not able to use Gaia yet, but will when her birthday comes around, wrote this. She asked me to put it on here for her, so she can see what other people think of her writing.
• Date: 03/17/2009
• Tags: reality

The things that I go through
The hardships and
The smiles
I always try to remember that
This is my reality
It's no fairy tail

I'm not gonna be carried away
By Prince Charming
No matter how much I wish
That I could
That he would care enough to

This is my reality and no wish can change that
Nobody knows what it takes to do that
And sometimes my rhyming
May be quite obscured
But that's just it
This is my reality
And nothing goes right

This is my reality
And I like it
Just the way it is

Comments

[Mud99]

Nothing wrong with it nothing particularly right either.

[xHoMiiCiDe]

i like the poem but there is no rhyme scheme
and it isnt written in iambic penatmeter......not trying to degrade your poem or nothing....but can you add something like that in your next one?