i really like this guy

• Artist: Xx_I R4p3-L30
• Description: this is a poem i wrote about someone special to me
  i hope u see this
  PS. mommy said hi -insider-
• Date: 03/25/2009
• Tags: really like love friendship

so...i like this guy
and yes his FINEE
his got a sexy smile
and also makes me laugh

he knows me for me
and not who im acting 2 b

he knows my weaknesses and streghts
which are both him

he can make me feel like im in heaven
he is my best friend
even tho i sometimes treat him

his sweet and kind and reallly FINEE

i'de never just give my heart out
but then again
....i reallly like this guy

Comments

[MJgwarrocker66]

try to use words and be careful with the rhyme. i read it and you have alot of errors. write another poem. 3/5.

[Narutonoobnoob]

not bad...not amazingly terrifically awesome...but not bad...1st comment WOOT!