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In your world you are nothing,
but the person holding it together.
Struck by loneliness that you cannot escape,
you look for attention to feed the need you have.
When noone else is there you always have time to think,
but that is not what you want to have.
The need you have to be like others,
boils inside and you don't care who YOU become.
In your world you should be the one who decides,
how you should run your life and not others.
Slowly erasing yourself and who you are,
you become someone else!
- by Sicoticfury |
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- | Submitted on 03/28/2009 |
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- Title: In your World
- Artist: Sicoticfury
- Description: Feel free to comment!
- Date: 03/28/2009
- Tags: your world
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- SirynECrow - 03/29/2009
- Your wording seems really awkward and doesn't flow very well. Instead of "not anything" a better option would've been "nothing." It wouldn't be as abrupt. However, I like the premises of the piece. I give it a four.
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