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Help Me
I have this feeling inside, its somthing
new, i am happy?....I havent an idea
what to do, help, do I smile as much
as i can?, do I keep to myself, Im not
sure of this feeling, does it have rules?
My mind is opening up to new things,
Its overflowing what do i do im scared,
this feeling..its taking over everything I
do, My thoughts, movements, what i say,
Its controlling everything Stop this please
I cant take it, im falling back, catch me,
hold me close, never let go....
- by Aiden Ecstacy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/31/2009 |
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- Title: Help Me
- Artist: Aiden Ecstacy
- Description: i have been feeling weird
- Date: 03/31/2009
- Tags: help
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Comments (1 Comments)
- FilipStiq - 07/26/2009
- I love this. Not just the idea, but the syntax, too. Especially the line breaks. It reminds me of the way the leader guy talks in that movie The Village; he pauses halfway through sentences, and then doesn't pause between sentences. A nice effect, hard to capture ((<--sorry, I love acting and poetry and watch that kind of stuff and rambling...)).
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