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shadows dissapear as night approaches
and all i wish is for you to be here
ive written your name on my wall a million times
one for each second i said to myself, "i love you"
your face consumes my mind
i cant think about anything else
if i did, i would die
and i hope you would even care
i dont even know if you know i exist
do you? i cant tell
because you ignore me
and never steal glances at me,
like i do to you.
- by EmoBananasStoleMyHomework |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/01/2009 |
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- Title: love?
- Artist: EmoBananasStoleMyHomework
- Description: well, yes, i do feel this way. and yes, i was bored when i wrote this.
- Date: 04/01/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- NostaIgia - 04/06/2009
- I like it! Just remember your grammar next time. ;P
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- Xx Pink Sakura - chan xX - 04/05/2009
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There are a couple of things you can fix. Put capitals every time you start a new line and on the 'I'. When you say words like I've, don't, remember the apostorphe.
Very well written though. Why don't you post this on fictionpress? - Report As Spam
- Nurse Katherine - 04/01/2009
- O_O thats exactly relates to me biggrin
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