my heart (2)

• Artist: Daddy Got This Account
• Description: this is the second poem. the original is "my heart" this is the contrast to the first one. ^^ and its dedicated to chewy1469. thank you chew! i love you! please rate and comment, thanks!
• Date: 04/03/2009
• Tags: heart

my heart is like heaven,
since you came along,
my heart is peaceful,
since youve been here.
my heart is bright, and happy.
my heart is no longer locked up,
its no longer wrapped up in chains.
my heart is free.
my heart is no longer dark and dreadful.
my heart is finally happy,
but most of all,
my heart is,
yours.

Comments

[Chewy1469]

Have I said I love you today? Well just in case...

I Love You. <3

[290DarkStars]

You know what im goanna say/ I am gonna say that these need more rhymes... more stanzas, that my poetry is better.... and i wanna tell you that i hate this poem. But If I said any of that I would be lieing mrgreen This is exactly the opposit! Its rhyming in tune! The rythem is strong, and the meaning brings peace.... great job.... please make more! I'm poetry hungry! :mrgreen; rawr.