Still Doll

• Artist: UGH_KITTY16
• Description: Its just a little poem i thought up when i was listening to a song with the same tile.
• Date: 04/04/2009
• Tags: still doll

i am a,
still doll.

one moment i lie on the floor,
until the music starts.

then i rise with a small turn,
i dance to the music, unconcisly.

when the music stops,
i fall.
as if i had never rised,
at all. icon_neutral.gif

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it's good in essence, but they're are some HUGE grammar and spelling mistakes. maybe a little more editing is in order?