At Midnight

• Artist: Dreamy Animeluver2008
• Description: well this is another one of my poems... idk if its too good so u tell me ^^
• Date: 04/04/2009
• Tags: midnight owls dark sleeping clouds

At Midnight
Owls fly freely
Clouds gather to get
Ready for a raging storm
Stars glisten brightly
At midnight
People sleep and dream
It's so very peaceful
The sky is dark
Sleeping too
At midnight...

Comments

[Emerald Charm]

Look, don't lie to him. It's pretty cliche. It does a decent job of painting a picture, but it doesn't really do anything particularly special. 2/5

[oORainbow ChipsOo]

you wrote it with great expression
5/5