does love...?

• Artist: rou0424
• Description: another writing from me....
  just some feelings that i had......
• Date: 04/04/2009
• Tags: does love sweet warm happy

What does love supposed to be

Does it supposed
to be sweet?
to be warm?
to be happy?

If they do,
then why can it make a person being so blue and miserable

What if it turns out
to be bitter?
to be cold?
to be sad?

What if they all do
Should i keep on

Comments

[b00_2]

You have some grammar issues that you could fix up. And... ermm... it's hard to explain, but i would make your poem more structured.

[Richard_theholderoftruth]

Love is the greatest joy a person can experience and yet the greatest pain we can endure. You must take the love with the saddness, the happiness with the anger or have nothing.