the werewolf

• Artist: lost in my frozen dreams
• Description: at my skool me and my friends are the twilight charecters. im Leah the only girl werewolf. :P
• Date: 04/05/2009
• Tags: werewolf

It gives me a rush
When my paws hit the ground
My fur rushing back
My family behind me
I get to the clearing
And howl at the moon
Play with my brothers
Sing with my mother
Then swim in the steam
Catch a rabbit
Or even a deer
Race back home and disapper

Comments

[Fyrewalle]

Well it's good if you were going for something simple. Descriptive words and figurative language always help. Grammar is also very important.

But all in all, not to shabby. 3/5