we don't know

• Artist: tweetyblock11
• Description: how we won't know everything that happens in the world ,but we can try our best to help what we can.
• Date: 04/09/2009
• Tags: dont know lostinlife

she feels stuck
inone of life's deadly ruts
but we don't know
how to show
that we really care
he feels stranded and that hes been branded
as dangerous
but we don't know
how to find
his long lost soul
and we don't know
if we can survive alone
because all the others look rotted to the bone
we have got to find a way
to save them
from the darkness of the end of day
for they have strayed far from the path
soon evil will find them and release it's wrath
but we won't know.

Comments

[calamito]

t sounds like you're trying way too hard to make it rhyme, and it has no flow or rhythm.

[tweetyblock11]

sorry about the second line i forgot to look it over when i finished.