Don't Hold Me Down

• Artist: Syrinick
• Description: Being in a band (name isnt fully decided yet) this song I wrote for us might be making it to our talent show at school. Not sure, but the guys in the band liked it. So, take a look! (tired to put how we sing it so there wouldnt be much confusion_
• Date: 04/09/2009
• Tags: dont hold down

(Intro)

(scream) DON'T HOLD ME DOWN!

(riff) 4 measures

Single: Slipping my raggedy shoes
and making my way to school
Notice you next to wall
Trying to act all cool
Getting beat down by so called homies
Sick of this bull ****
Here I come and hold on tight now
Because I'm cutting lose!

Chorus: Breaking out
Shout out loud
Show no mercy
And give them hell
Fight real hard
Let them drown
Listen up kid
Just dont hold me down (drag it and raise pitch)
LISTEN!
Raw!

Single 2: Picked you up and dust you off
You patetic wretch, couldnt' handle a mob
But you got me and that holds value
But I wont be here forever so grow up now boy!

Chorus: Breaking out
Shout out loud
Show no mercy
And give them hell
Destiny calls
And you havent found
That spark inside you
Just dont hold me down( drag and raise)
Listen now!

Single 3: (softly)
Take your hands and make a fist
Show them that you mean bussniess
Have some pride and live your life
Smack that ***hole in the fricken eye!

(Guitar solo4 measures, then drums come in with addtional 4 measures and last beat with a long note. then into chorus)

Chorus: Breaking out (echo: ok)
Shout out loud (echo:here we go now)
Show no mercy
And give them hell (echo: your going down)
Fight real hard
Let them drown (echo: oh no)
Way to go kid
Both Vocals: (slows and regular voice) You didnt hold me down (drag and falls)

Comments

[Jarmis]

It would probably be fun to play, but... It's pretty generic metal lyrics. Overly aggressive, lot's of "hell" and "show no mercy." Your band could make it sound good if they play really well, but the lyrics don't hold up all on their own.
But like I said, if you play good it'll still sound good. wink