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She's the kinda girl,
Who looks alive,
When she's dead.
She's the kinda girl,
Who looks awake,
When she's asleep.
She's the kinda girl,
Who looks insane,
When she's crying.
She's the kinda girl,
Who looks beautiful,
When she's bleeding.
She's the kinda girl,
Who can laugh,
When she's upset.
She's the kinda girl,
Who only thinks of others,
When she's dying inside.
She's the kinda girl,
Whois energetic,
When she's disabled.
She's the kinda girl,
Who is intelligent,
When she is dumb.
She's the kinda girl,
Who makes life worth it,
When it's ripping you apart.
She's the kinda girl,
Who I can love,
When I can only hate.
- Title: She's The Kinda Girl
- Artist: kannair
- Description: read and comment on my poetry
- Date: 04/11/2009
- Tags: shes kinda girl
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Comments (4 Comments)
- kannair - 07/11/2009
- ty i will do better read more of my poetry
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/09/2009
- it's too plain. Dont get me wrong, contradiction can be a great poetic device but you overdid it. work on using different devices. 2/5. with room for improvement. please comment back
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- skye ariel-night sparrow - 04/13/2009
- thats hot man i love it
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- Kikyo Demon of Fire - 04/11/2009
- omg thats the best poem ever!
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