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Lindsey's eyes are china teacups,
large as saucers, glossy like pearls.
Stephanie's eyes are caramel chocolate,
bits of cinnamon in the swirls.
Patrick's eyes are like a smile,
glowing and gleaming, they laugh and dance.
Michael's eyes are deep black holes,
drawing you in with every glance.
Genevieve's eyes are jade twilight,
cloudy sunbeams after a storm.
Tyler's eyes are the noonday sky,
crystal blue, and sunny warm.
Sarah's eyes are the vast blue ocean,
shimmering, splashing, and just as deep.
My eyes are drooping and fluttering.
I think it's time to go to sleep.
- by xXxAmericanCheeseOmletxXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/11/2009 |
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- Title: Eyes: Portals to the Soul
- Artist: xXxAmericanCheeseOmletxXx
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Hey, this is probably my first poem done outside of school (aka out of my free will) so i'm not a very experienced poet. please no overly negative or insulting comments. i appreciate high ratings and good critisizm. I HEART COMMENTS! IT MAKES ME FEEL GOOD TO KNOW PEOPLE ARE READING MY WORK! i may have misspelled somthing so please bring that to my attention. Thank you for taking the time to review my work and hopefully rating it high.
I notice the little things (clouds, outfits, and eyes) - Date: 04/11/2009
- Tags: eyes people details notice soul
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Comments (4 Comments)
- xXxAmericanCheeseOmletxXx - 04/18/2009
- SOMEONE PLEEZ COMMENT!!!
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- xXxAmericanCheeseOmletxXx - 04/12/2009
- TO ALL YOU READERS! the girl who commented below me, bellacosa67. she is lindsey, the girl with ginormous pale blue glossy eyes.
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- bellacosa67 - 04/12/2009
- I love it girl! You added people from the one you texted me! You're do right about Tyler's eyes!!!
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- iifwesh_bunnii - 04/12/2009
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cute poem biggrin
i love hows its all about peoples eyes
so sweet, so nice, so true razz - Report As Spam
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