In the end

• Artist: Prophetic_Sorrow
• Description: This poem was more written for a friend,
  but i've felt the pain and revamped the feelings a bit since my first draft.
• Date: 04/12/2009
• Tags: depressing love broken

She made me laugh
She made me smile
She's what made my life worthwhile

But now shes gone
My spirits torn
All I have left is to mourn

Without her warmth
without her arms to hold me close
sorrow will soon be my overdose

For the thought of life
is a distant memory
what you left was a catastrophe

But I let you keep my heart
so when im dead
Even with no words said

The guilt will build
then you'll see
the pain and misery you truely caused me

Comments

[Juanito Shet]

Agreed, Angelic Tune, it is quite moving! 4/5.

[Enqlish]

Very powerful,
I feel for you man.