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Clawing the walls that surround
Screaming but no sound is stressed
Nothing gives way, no progress is found
As this enclosed space is compressed
Gasping for a breath before closure
Falling deeper as the life will fray
Tears streak down a broken face
Hearts fracture to overexposure
Healing in a lopsided way
Yet still questing for a revival case
Giving up on finding hope in life
Light barely escaping the reach
Its grip tightens with every strife
Feeling anguish as comforts breach
Faking happiness so not be bade
The sinking feeling grows deeper
Pressed on all sides yet cannot attack
As this life will start to fade
From dust was made and dust its keeper
Nothing taken nothing given back
- by minneapple102 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/12/2009 |
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- Title: Desolation
- Artist: minneapple102
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Description:
it's an ode i did at school :
it's about being alone and without hope
tell me what you think? - Date: 04/12/2009
- Tags: desolation
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Panic Pirate - 05/26/2009
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I like it and can really relate to some extent
Good job smile - Report As Spam