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when i look at you my mind and heart set a drift
i see you being bathed in light
while i am tied in the dark
you see and call my name
i can not hear and call yours
i try to get up but my chains are to strong
i look to the light and find strength
this strength must be my love for you
only you can give me this strength
i break my chians but can't move
you call for me
this time i hear you
i call and you hear me
but you can not leave the light
i can not leave this darkness
at that time i know what i need to do
i pick up a stone and throw it as hard as i can
not at you but at what seperats us
i hear i hiss and know i hit the opstical
then my evil self attaks
with one punch i vankwish him
i am able to move
but when i steep into the light
you scream at my wound
not because of how bad it is but how your love healed it
we embrace and stay together till we die
- Title: how sweet is the light
- Artist: pinconojo
- Description: once agian i was thinking of someone special
- Date: 04/16/2009
- Tags: sweet light
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Sapphire_Honuka_73 - 07/14/2009
- wow, how come u never told me about this one? unless u did, hmmm i can't really remember. then again i can't really remember 2 days ago .... anyway it was really good and is it about that girl georgia u told me about? and yeah, u do need to work harder on your spelling, it doesn't look perfessional which is one of the reason's why i always check mine. just helping u out buddy ^.^
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- Problum - 06/13/2009
- it is sweet (: but yeah a few miss spellings. other than that its perfect,well...to me it is xD 4/5
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- -PANDATUBE - 04/21/2009
- pretty good, but there are quite a few misspellings. such as, "vankwish" should be, "vanquish." 3/5.
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