Broken

• Artist: wwDMBww
• Description: A broken heart.
• Date: 04/18/2009
• Tags: broken

You broke my heart.

Now Im falling apart.

You stuck me in sorrow

though you said,

‘’I’d still love you tomorrow’’.

I want someone to love again

And I want to see..

Our love for each other,

Really be.

I’d love you like I say it.

There’s no other way to portray it.

I trusted you to love me

and you stabbed me by saying,

‘’We can never be”.

I couldn’t live longer

And I wanted you to see

How my life began with you

And ended with a gun and a boom.

Comments

[Z E T H I E K A]

a bit too depressing bt still great smile ..need to get ur rythm and sylables evened out tho 3/5

[Asga-ya-ge]

needs a little work but its a good poem

[wwDMBww]

Much thanks. Ill be sure to read some of yours.

[hgfktdtvyrknyubrubtfnm]

in poetry, i would say that is kind of mediocre, but keep working, use your imagination. don't just write poems about the obvious, go deeper, find that self determination. inspire. just improve.