Fated

• Artist: AncientChronicles
• Description: I wrote this last year in around October and this is my very first work. Hope you guys like it. Leave comments and teach me how i should improve. thanks! :)
• Date: 04/18/2009
• Tags: fated fate friendship friend friends

It was fated
For us to meet
If I didn't take the risk the other day
We would never, ever meet

'What risk was that?'
You must be wondering
Cracking your head all night through
And soon you'll get a headache in the noon

It happened several years ago
I was silly, gullible and innocent
I corresponded with a guy two years older
And could have gotten myself into trouble

But luck was on my side
And it was fate that made us meet
The moment I risked my life
For a friend whom I've never met,
God has already arranged all the paths
Just so we could meet

Isn't it obvious it was fate?
It was fate that brought us together
It was fate that made us meet
If I didn't take the risk the other day
We would never, ever meet.

Comments

[CanKneez]

i agree with zero.. but I like the concept=]

[zerochan923600]

yes, watch your grammar. "We will never, ever meet" should have been in past tense. it feels awkward when i read that. also at the end "We will never."

its a very touching poem. the meaning is a bit ambiguous to me, but thats ok.

[amagicalperson]

I like it, but the constant tense-changes detract from the flow of the whole thing. Otherwise it's really good.