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The end for you, is drawing near
On a pale horse, it fills you with fear
Your heart is fire, your mind is ice
Your last breaths escape like filthy little mice
Pain tears through you, a thousand rusty knives
White hot bliss consumes your thoughts
While a sweet black mist shrouds your sight
Death is at your door, all you wanted was MORE!
- by Nicholas Delacroix |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/23/2009 |
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- Title: Heart Attack!
- Artist: Nicholas Delacroix
- Description: A poem I wrote.
- Date: 04/23/2009
- Tags: heart attack
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- ll Tears of Joy ll - 04/24/2009
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3/5
It starts off good
But the ending could be improved
I felt it didnt reach its full potential - Report As Spam