regrets in b minor, sharp c

• Artist: DiscoDaemon
• Description: just a poem I wrote to get some feelings out of my system. It's what I like to call a free-write poem. Regardless of what you might think of it, I'd love to hear your thoughts, and have you take a look at it. Thanks.
• Date: 04/28/2009
• Tags: regrets minor sharp emotional poem

and

parked in my head
are the enunciations
pronunciations

of a million things

empty cradles
and spilled soups
fierce denials
fiercer declarations

of love

and it's no wonder
that when they press

against the backs of my eyeballs

that out will leak a tear or two

like oil,
to relieve the pressure
of my battered rig
or tormented

skyscraper citywindows lot.

Comments

[Minion Marionette]

I loved it. I usually don't like stuff like this. But something about this one...it touched me. It reminded me of my own poetry. 5/5