Nature's Temptation

• Artist: SemeSideOfThePaddle
• Description: This is my first poetry submission. I wrote this when I was twelve year olds when my best friend died in a car crash with his aunt. It's hard to desrcibe the poem, so please read, rate and comment.
• Date: 04/28/2009
• Tags: death earth spiritual

Whispering trees and singing flowers

Whistling winds on the midnight hours

Soft bells sounding in the distance

Stop and listen with no resistance

Lay us to rest-a never ending sleep

As we give the earth our souls to keep

Comments

[PronglePop]

I love it true poetry

[singchick8]

Tear tear! That was really good!

[Rogelio-CP_64]

wow. such talent at such a young age. u truly gave ur friend something by saying such words. i know what the death of a loved one feels like. good job.

[x-XMistress_MurderX-x]

Heartfelt.. 4/5