Melting Ice Cream

• Artist: black_butterfly_maiden
• Description: I tried to make everything rhyme, I couldn't think of anything good today....................tell me wat u think
• Date: 04/29/2009
• Tags: melting

Since the day you went away
At first I didnt know what to say
Flashbacks of us walking along the bay
I knew I was having a really bad day

I wanted to cry
I wanted to die
I wanted to forget the sparkles in your eye
I wanted to forget the way you ate pie

Now I'm sitting here all alone
All this time I wanted to mone
I'm the ice cream you're the cone
Melting away without you this I have shown

Comments

[Lady Gwendolynn O Danaan]

Did you mean "Wanted to moan"? and not "mone?" It's interesting and I enjoy the imagery you used. The title is fitting for the piece.