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I can feel all my spirit lifted high
I can feel breezes of cool and crisp air
and far beyond the clear and cloudless sky
The cooling wind blows through without a care
and blows away the clouds without a trace
O how I long to go and be up there
O how a peaceful and innocent grace
wild green life growing in plains open wide
the budded flower uncovers its face
The life of spring brings me to life inside
- by 290DarkStars |
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- | Submitted on 04/29/2009 |
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- Title: Spring Breeze and Spring Life
- Artist: 290DarkStars
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Description:
I wrote this sonet for english class,
enjoy and be sure to comment...
...please... - Date: 04/29/2009
- Tags: spring breeze spring life
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Comments (4 Comments)
- 1so_so11rry_ari11 - 10/25/2009
- well because you asked nicely i shall comment xD well i do hope you got an A cuz if not... your English teacher is an a$$
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- Daddy Got This Account - 07/18/2009
- aaw, thats so cute. i thought it was really nice, this piece makes me feel really happy, kinda like, well, uh... XD kinda like im floating on the wind. just care free. (in a good way) but i really liked the last line, "The life of spring brings me to life inside" dang dude, i really liked that line. dont ask why, i dont know. XD all i know is i really liked it. ^^ lol. well, ADD MORE POEMS!!! gaia and the world needs more poets like you. poets that arent shallow. youre very talented. keep it up
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- Black Ravenz - 07/17/2009
- i really like it,good job
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- Buttercup Veela - 04/30/2009
- ♥
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