I am What I am

• Artist: Big_Mama_Kat
• Description: this a poem i wrote when i felt confused and i did not kno what was i to do so i wrote what i felt
  (this is also about how i was not shore who i liked at the moment, i thought that i loved someone but that i liked them or that he was not even the one i had so many feelings at the same time i did not kno who i liked all i realy kno was that i was me and only me...)
• Date: 05/02/2009
• Tags: unspokenlove

I see what i want
i want what i need
i dream the unknown
Do i see what i want
Do i dream what i need

What dream is not for me
But what i want is so confusing......

Do i need what i want or do i see what i need
do i speak with dreams
or do i stay silent is this my unspoken dream
do i keep it a secret or
do i shout what i see, hear, or even feel
ALL I KNOW IS THAT I AM WHAT I AM

Comments

[Big_Mama_Kat]

plz add commets

[Big_Mama_Kat]

sry about my grammer... razz but its confusing because its like that so that u get the feel of being confused razz

[Llywelyn Fawr]

It was a little confusing. I would add some punctuation. Good poets can use punctuation effectively. Plus, why did you capitalize "I" in some places but not the others? Same with "do"? Clean it up a little and you will have a fairly decent poem.

[insert_name_here_3]

confusing but that was mood so well put 5/5

[Big_Mama_Kat]

please give me comments... razz