Shadows in the Dark...

• Artist: giuliana911
• Description: Its a poem about an old friend who i've been thinking about latley... How'd we lose touch Celeste?Shadow
• Date: 05/05/2009
• Tags: shadows dark

Those who have died are not dead,
They live again inside my head.
Why am I under this curse?
You make me better, no i'm worse.
Why am I so sick today?
Am I gonna die this way?
Your just a shadow in the dark...

Comments

[Psychotic Blasphemy]

This is good, but it is a little short. And maybe the rhythem is too centered, maybe use a few different rhythems in different parts. Other than that, 4/5! Keep it up! :3

[MindlessError]

.. You should try and get back into contact with this friend <3 5/5

[Zachary Dellinger]

I actually really like this.
I envy poets and your ability to put words to emotions.