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The ones who helped me stand at all
Are the ones who are there when I fall
The ones who helped me stand back up
Are the ones who taught me to walk
The ones who were there when I ran
Are the ones who triped me when I passed a crossing
The ones who helped me laugh about it
Are the ones that I call friends
The ones who taught me to trust
Are the ones I trust the most
The ones I grew up with, I hold the closest
So they know I've got their backs
The ones who made me, me
Are the ones I owe
Hear me now I'll stand by all of you until I die
I will never forget you and I hope you feel the same
- by Code Vermillion |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/12/2009 |
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- Title: For what I am, this I owe
- Artist: Code Vermillion
- Description: I'm hoping for epicness here, I like it, but no one ever seems to like my work. But you know what? SCREW THEM! I hope you guys like it, please leave comments ^^
- Date: 05/12/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- BrokenSoul225 - 06/02/2009
- Pretty good, hard to get the tone though, add a little more detail and emotional words
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- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 05/16/2009
- I realise this shouldn't be sad, but it is for me. That last line. "I will never forget you and i hope you feel the same". it's soo sad! Cuz my BEST friend's just moved country and i'll never see her again, and the whole poem just brings back memories of her :'( 5 - looks like it means different stuff to everyone.
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- Teleia Patricia - 05/14/2009
- lil bit of typo but the message's there
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- Code Vermillion - 05/14/2009
- Heh, that's the whole point of giving them your trust ^^ You can't lose what you never had, nor can you gain what you already have ^^
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- Lola stelladora - 05/14/2009
- nice poem but it isn't always right to put all of your trust in friends. Just as how they r the ones who help u rise they are the ones that sometimes bring u to a demise. Be careful.
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