Confession

• Artist: bunnyfan194
• Description: Just a little something I wrote ^^;; it's not that good, I was just curious as to what other people would think :3
• Date: 05/14/2009
• Tags: confession angst sadness

The sunlight fades,
A smile dies,
The night descends,
You realize,

How sad you are,
How much in pain,
Feelings crash,
Like pouring rain,

Dissolve your mask,
Let the tears flow,
Come morning sun,
No one will know.

But who’ll be there?
To hear your crys?
To calm your sobs,
To dry your eyes?

Does no one care?
Can no one help?
Can’t someone save
Me from myself?

The shining knife,
Against my skin,
My pain release,
My only friend.

It doesn’t ask,
It understands,
Crimson relief,
Along my hands.

Let Rivers Red,
Wash pain away.
Don’t worry though,
I want to stay.

I can’t die now,
My life can’t end,
I won’t do that
To you, my friends.

Comments

[Cherubim Aurora]

This is really good. I usually find writings about cutting tiresome; but this was well conceived and impressive to read. Thanks for sharing. 5/5

[kara123125]

this is amazing! 5/5! dont listen to ppl who say they dont like it. its fantastic!

[Precious Misery]

this is absolutely AMAZING!!and this is exactly how i feel right now...and its beautiful 5/5 heart

[Mantangables]

Its okay, started out fairly well. You need to spice up this topic though and make it more unique

[WorIds]

it's really good!i know how it fells to feel like this and i love this poem!!!5/5 i say 4get whoever says any different