Shadow in the Dark

• Artist: -PrettyBandGirl-
• Description: This is just a little poem that I wrote one day.It was inspired by a shadow and my own feelings.I hope you can enjoy it.
• Date: 05/16/2009
• Tags: shadow feelings life emotional depression

Nothing more than a shadow in the dark
Seldom heard and seldom seen by anyone
Each trial gone through has left its mark
Left wondering when the pain will be done

A heart barely beating,so empty and lost
Escape seems improbable no reason to hope
So eager to leave it all no matter the cost
No longer capable of trying to cope

Time is running out,the limit isn't far
An end is coming,either good or bad
Such a broken soul with a permanent scar
Life's not much for someone so sad

The story goes on,yet to be told
Still waiting for the rest to unfold

Comments

[immirtal_love74]

i like it. it kinda shows the real depth of someone. u should email me if u have any more.

[xXxVampyGenxXx]

Well I love it. It is sad, but sadness is one of the greatest muse for poetry. Aside from that the metric and rhyme were lovely. ^-^ 5/5

[Jeca066]

OK no offense but It sounded kinda emo to me, and here is why, oh by the way plz don't spread like a virus, there's nothing worse than a bunch of sad people in the world, sorry for being so critical but in a weird way I'm sure you will find this criticism some what helpful to your life. like you said your story is still unfolding, you don't know what life is all about yet, there's going to be some sh*tty times, but you need to take control of your life and find out whats going to make you happy,