Happy Birthday, Evil Person

• Artist: moomcgee
• Description: This is a poem I wrote when I had nothing to do and I thought I would enter it. I also have an avai made after it.
• Date: 05/18/2009
• Tags: happy birthday evil person

Happy Birthday
You little piece of s**t
I have always hated you
I wanted to lock you in a pit

But I got you a gift
For your birthday
It took all night
And some of yesterday

It is ticking
It is clicking

And it will blow up in your face
Even though everyone else
Wanted me to hit you with a mace

So please open it
When I am not near
It would make me happy
And full of cheer

So Happy Birthday
You little piece of s**t
Soon you will be in a coffin
Stuck in a pit

Comments

[BaileyLUV12]

hahaha i love it 5/5!

[Tiej]

very disturbing....
but in terms of structure it seemed satisfactory...
i must question thou do you have movite to write this poem
try perhaps write a poem you can relate to you.
poetry is a matter of expression so use to actually express something ^^