-
Staring at a flickering flame
as it climbs the wall I see my face
inside the burning fire
then the flame goes higher and higher.
Soon the roof caves in crushing all within
I fall to the floor
and cry for the Lord.
Then a sudden burst from the door
a man in yellow pulls me out
but i resisted as I screamed and shout
I got away and down stairs
screaming for my mom and sister.
I found them
and held them in my arm
then we prayed as I sobbed.
Im staring at a flickering flame
I took a breath
and blew it away.
- by Xxx_ShadowWiz_xxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/19/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: Fire
- Artist: Xxx_ShadowWiz_xxX
- Description: This Poem was inspiered by a fire that cause many deaths in my apartment complex... luckly i survived.. (May 14, 2009)
- Date: 05/19/2009
- Tags: fire
- Report Post
Comments (2 Comments)
- mystery123456789 - 05/24/2009
- personally i dont think any changes are needed its a great poem plus to the fact it was inspired by something 5/5
- Report As Spam
- Xxx_ShadowWiz_xxX - 05/19/2009
- Plz dont be one of those people that make rude comments... I would like some1 2 give me good advice because poetry is one of my favorite thing in the world...
- Report As Spam