broken and shattered

• Artist: DinoRawrWithBeadBracelets
• Description: i wrote this when i had mixed emotions and had thoughts on my mind
  and i feel it s the only way to express myself in a positive way
• Date: 05/19/2009
• Tags: broken shattered

i hear them as though they were in my ear
but no they weren't there
they never will be
i thought i heard that person in my ear
but no they weren't there
they never will be
the silent cries
the pitiful lies
the horrible nights
the voices disappearing into the midst
like a deadly soul
i try to rewind back
but honestly no one knows -----
the shame the pain the sorrow the things we all face, the things people try to ignore

i wish time stopped or a curse can be broken
i wish worlds wouldn't be torn apart
i wish the lies, cries, the nights were outspoken
lively broken
realisticly cured
normally spoken
really! fixed


the shame and all hidden
just trying to hide
hide eveything
everything torn apart, broken down
down from lives
lives shattered
shattered people
people suffering
suffering in the night
night taken by the light
light that brings us down

Comments

[Caesura Caelum]

i can feel the emotions your display here in your poem, you wrote a very good poem though good job, definate 5/5 but btw you may like a poem i had written called "Standing Tall, For When I Fall" you may like it, that is if you would like to read it, i don't care if you don't but you may like it, i dunno, but anyways, great poem 5/5