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what he can't see is as plain as day, with every sip he fades away.
with every sip his mood is changed, his color, fading quick to gray.
an empty shell of what used to be, now a distant memory.
he stabs those with daggers when his voice is raised, he finds himself in an uncontrollable rage.
those he loves are far away, led him to his drinking ways.
he's alone to waste away, his dreams are all that stay.
dreams of life, to start anew. dreams to be like me and you.
but the drink in hand controls his life, to him, his drunken sacrifice.
the demons of his ways, eat at him with each passing day.
the thoughts of what could have been, washed away with every sin.
with every sip he forgets, every night filled with regrets.
of what could be waiting at the door, but the house is empty furthermore.
this is whats left of this man, brave may he be as he stands.
to face the world he was cast out, to face those who look with doubt.
a shell of his past remains, his life spent in vain.
what he can't see is as plain as day, with every sip he fades away.
- by SHiNYxChaRizArd |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/22/2009 |
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- Title: The Empty Shell
- Artist: SHiNYxChaRizArd
- Description: this is a poem about my drunk a** father. this is my second poem to date and hopefully there's more to come! he's (my father) is a empty shell of what he was hence the name : The Empty Shell.
- Date: 05/22/2009
- Tags: empty drunk shell
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sora Kisaragi - 08/16/2009
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Nice One.
It's soo true, though. - Report As Spam
- moonlightwolf111 - 08/16/2009
- I like it, and it is so true about what happens
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- SHiNYxChaRizArd - 08/16/2009
- *glares at omouto-kun* i hate you... THAT'S NOT WHAT I MEANT!!!! DAMN YOU!!!!
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- Rabbit Frenzy - 08/16/2009
- ...Comment for Dani-chan...
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- yourswerty4 - 05/23/2009
- So sad yet so true . . . You did wonderful Dani . . . Hehe, you made Mommy cry . . . Poor Mommy . . .
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- Breathe Easy Tonight - 05/23/2009
- aww!!! T-T poor dani!!! im sorry!! good job though
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- Two-bit FoxTrot - 05/22/2009
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Good poem
I'm sorry this is happening to you though
THis is whey i vow to never touch alcohol - Report As Spam